Wilson enters the house, and the most amazing sight greets him. Half naked women are all about the hallway, with their arms drape across a guy or two.
“Dude, what are you waiting for? The party’s at the back!” beckons Thomas, the host.
Wilson takes a deep breath and exhales.
Alice stops in her tracks and stares in disbelief. Dominic, her boyfriend, is holding the hand of another girl! Without hesitation, Alice crosses the road furiously, squinting her eyes to catch a glimpse of the mysterious girl, and halts for a second time. It is her best friend – Jessica.
Jenny powders her nose to perfection and stands up. She can already hear the thunderous applause in her head, see the standing ovation, and feel the numerous bouquets of flowers stacking upon her arms. She glances through her script for the final time and smiles. Tonight will be her night.
Clutching her bleeding chest, Mary flees for her life across the dark alley. She can feel the warm, sticky blood pouring out from her wound as she staggers and hobbles along, eventually collapsing onto the ground, thinking that she can no longer take another step. “Help,” she cries out feebly.
Gwendolyn glances about her surroundings. The rows of shelves seems like a good cover. With both apprehension and excitement, she strides to the nearest shelf with the latest cosmetics. She slides a lipstick into her bag quickly, and then walkd off like as if nothing out of the ordinary happened.
Nice job with engaging stories and characters. The 2nd story didn’t meet the word count. It has 49 words!